Saturday, December 5, 2009

Chapter -5: Foreword

Hi, Zeke here.

Im posting this for a friend. The storyline is mine but she's my inspiration. But i hope that everyone who reads this likes it and tells their friends. As a sneak peak here's an excerpt from Chapter 23. (HA!)


He spoke proper english, but it was thickly covered with an unusual accent "I suppose there is no point in denying it." He removed his hat and his sunglasses, ran his hand through his hair and turned towards me. "Yes, I am Krendenov of Team Nightmare. Now, who are you, and why have you chosen to disrupt me?"
I could feel the sweat building up on my forehead, even though he exerted no magical power. But as I opened my mouth I looked into his eyes. They were white.
His entire eye was a white sphere.
"I-I-I-II..." I began my sentance stuttering. On the inside, I was screaming. (Great, that really inspires fear.)
Zeke sighed, "Do I have to do everything? We've come here to challenge you and take your _____ ______. Do you accept our challenge?"
Krendenov looked at Zeke, then back at me. "It appears you are disturbed by my lack of visible pupils. Very well," He put his sunglasses back on. "Let us go somewhere more private."
We were no longer in front of the cafe. Now we were on the outcropping overlooking the city. "How did you...?
"Transport us? My _____ _____'s powers are not limited to battle dimensions. Which is fairly convenient, given the amount of work I put into recieving it. But that is not the matter. We are to battle, are we not?"
Zeke and I shared a look. The fact that he still had yet to show a shred of magical power, even with teleporting us, told he was at least at Deity-Class strength.
"Well then, shall we commence battle, or will you two stand there with fear on your faces?"
In a flash, Zeke was in the air, Iklaria already materialized. But when he brought the sword down, Krendenov vanished. I drew Akleadest and began to move, anticipating Krendenov's materialization. As I turned around, I caught the sun in the corner of my right eye. Then I realized the sun was to my left. "Zeke he's in..." My voice trailed off as my vision focused on Krendenov. Only it wasn't Krendenov. It was a flaming man with wings.
Krendenov's voice came from the flaming monster above us "It appears you did not research my powers before challenging me. Allow me to explain. My _____ _____ is called Nytollyo. He is the 49th Ultimate Spirit of the Unknown Kings. Being so, he only reaches full power when bonding with his master. However, when bonded, his power exceeds that of any Entity-Class Spirit. And this," He materialized a sword that looked like a really long mail opener "is the Krendenov Family Heirloom, Wiellvelot."
"Now, are you prepared to die?"

Hope you liked it. Ill put up chapter -4 next week and expect chaper 1 by christmas or new years. And Dont forget to post comments, questions and ideas! thanks!

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